The fourth most common essay question is a bit more challenging to write. Because it’s all to easy to fall into a clichéd response. Please don’t let that deter you. The first response that comes to mind probably is the same response that every other applicant will write about. This fourth question is well worth spending a bit more time:
#4. Tell about a meaningful activity to you
The most important word in this phrase is “you.” With that in mind, please spend some time thinking about what makes you unique. The first step to drafting your response is
Free-writing – Handwrite your initial response to this question for about 10 minutes. Set the timer on your iPhone, place your pen on the paper, write every thought that comes to mind, write some more, and only lift your pen when the timer blares. Ignore grammar and all of that, just write.
When you read what you’ve read, does it sound like you? Or does it sound like every other applicant? Other applicants will write about leadership roles in student council or class cohort. Really? There’s not a whole lot unique about those leadership roles. There are 27,000 high schools and therefore 27,000 student council leaders and 27,000 class leaders. Again, think about what activity says something unique about you and avoid the clichés.
Once you state the activity in about 25 words or less, the remainder of your essay should focus on the why. Why is that activity meaningful to you? Elaborating on the “why” gives the admissions reader a stronger sense for who you are. When you focus on “you” and the “why,” your essay will definitely stand out. No one else can write it like you.
What activity did you choose?
In next weeks posting, we will look at Question #4
